Talk:Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2022/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:30, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Congrats on this very recent nom; I will fully review tomorrow! --K. Peake 20:30, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• Pipe Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
• "seventeen times since" → "17 times since" per MOS:NUM
• "for the contest's final," → "for the final," to avoid overusage of the contest
• "marking Albania's eighth non-qualification" → "marking their eighth non-qualification"

Background

• "seventeen times since" → "17 times since" per MOS:NUM
• "during its first participation in" → "when first participating in"
• "Since 2018, Albania managed to qualify for the final in both the 2018 and 2019 contests, as well as in the 2021 contest," → "After 2017, Albania managed to qualify for the final in the 2018, 2019 and 2021 contests," to avoid overusage of 2018 and being too wordy for 2021
• "finishing 21st place" → "finishing in 21st place"
• Remove commas around Radio Televizioni Shqiptar (RTSH), also this broadcaster does not appear to be mentioned by the source
• Again, RTSH are not mentioned for the second sentence's part nor is the competition as featuring several artists and songs
• "confirming the nation's participation on 20 October 2021." → "reaffirming the nation's participation on 20 October."

Before Eurovision

Festivali i Këngës

• "Radio Televizioni Shqiptar (RTSH) organised the" → "RTSH organised the"
• Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest 2022
• The songwriters are unsourced in the tables

Eurovision night

• Wikilink Ronela Hajati
• Wikilink "Sekret"

Promotion

• Remove wikilinks on all of the cities apart from Tel Aviv since they are capitals, also shouldn't these be listed in the order of which she performed at first to last?
• "on 5 March 2022." → "on 5 March."

At Eurovision

• Much of the info on the img text is not backed up by the sources

New references added. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:05, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

• Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2022
• "the European Broadcasting Union (EBU) split the" → "the EBU split the"
• Where is the favorable part sourced? From what I read, it seems to be that countries were in pots to avoid similar voting patterns.

Fixed. Iaof2017 (talk) 12:52, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

• "that Albania is scheduled to" → "that Albania was scheduled to" per the announcement being in the past
• Remove "in the contest" at the end of the last sentence
• Img looks good!
• "to change the performance prior to" → "to change it prior to"
• "of press, Ardit Çuni, revealed that Hajati would proceed with the planned" → "of press Ardit Çuni revealed that Hajati would proceed with the same" per the source

Voting

• "the first semi-final, and to" → "the first semi-final and to"

Points awarded to Albania

• Good

Points awarded by Albania

• Good

Detailed voting results

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks really great at 12.3%!!!!
• ESCtoday → ESCToday on refs 3 and 5, citing as publisher instead
• Cite Eurovoix as publisher instead on ref 6
• Cite Euronews Albania as publisher instead on ref 7
• Pipe Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH on ref 9
• Shouldn't refs 10 and 13 cite as Radio Televizioni Shqiptar (RTSH) for consistency?
• Wikilink Wiwibloggs on ref 11
• Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest on ref 16
• Cite Wiwibloggs as publisher instead on ref 17
• Remove wikilink on Wiwibloggs for ref 18

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 08:17, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

Hello Kyle Peake, nice to hear from you again. I've responded to all of your comments above, please let me know if that is not the case. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:11, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, I do not see any issues remaining! --K. Peake 20:00, 10 June 2022 (UTC)