Talk:Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2004/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:50, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Great to see you nominated numerous articles about Albania's participation in the contest; I will take this one on shortly! --K. Peake 18:50, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Change semi-final points to 167 in the infobox
• Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
• "of the Eurovision Song Contest," → "of the contest,"

Background

• "the national broadcaster," → "the country's national broadcaster,"
• "choosed the long-standing competition" → "chose the annual competition"
• "for the Eurovision Song Contest." → "for the contest."

Before Eurovision

Festivali i Këngës

• Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2004

Competing entries

• Target "Imazhi yt" to "The Image of You"

Shows

Semi-finals

• "and 15 in the grand final," → "and 15 in the second semi-final,"
• [5] should be at the end of the para's last sentence as well as on the headers of the tables, like the 2006 participation
• Target "Imazhi yt" to "The Image of You"

Final

• "by a 50/40 combination of votes" → "by a 50/50 combination of votes" since that is what the source actually says
• Target "Imazhi yt" to "The Image of You" on both mentions

At Eurovision

• "at the Abdi İpekçi Arena in" → "at Abdi İpekçi Arena in"
• Target semi-final to Eurovision Song Contest 2004#Semi-final
• "and the final on" → "and the grand final on" with the target
• Target to Rules of the Eurovision Song Contest should solely be on "Eurovision rules" text
• "although the top ten countries" → "although the top 10 countries" per MOS:NUM
• "of the contest in position 13," → "of the Eurovision Song Contest 2004 at position 13,"
• The nation being announced among the top 10 entries of the semi-final is unsourced; use this at the end of that sentence

Voting

• "and 10 points from" → "and 10 points from both"
• "and grand final of" → "and final of"

Points awarded to Albania

• Good

Points awarded by Albania=

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 19.4%
• Top job on archiving all of these!!
• Wikilink European Broadcasting Union on ref 2
• Remove wikilink on European Broadcasting Union for ref 7

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until you have fixed all of the issues, which I expect will be in a quick amount of time like you have consistently made fixes in the past! --K. Peake 21:33, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: Thank you for the review, I have addressed the comments. Cheers :D--Lorik17 (talk) 21:55, 18 January 2021 (UTC)

@Iaof2017: Nice work, but you still need to change the points to 167 in the infobox and change the first mention of final for the Eurovision Song Contest 2004 to be grand final instead. --K. Peake 06:02, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: Thanks for the reminder, I didn't noticed the error in the infobox; did you mean this [1]?--Lorik17 (talk) 14:18, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Iaof2017 No, not that; I was referring to "and the final on 15 May 2004." in the body. --K. Peake 14:43, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

@Kyle Peake: done. :)--Lorik17 (talk) 14:46, 19 January 2021 (UTC)

Iaof2017 ✓ Pass, good thing you understood what needed fixing after my clarification! --K. Peake 14:50, 19 January 2021 (UTC)