Talk:Alabama Wildlife Federation

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Hello there, I made a few minor adjustments to help the flow of your article (before I realized I was supposed to discuss them here, first.) The history of Lanark is very interesting. Perhaps you could expand what specific accomplishments the two founders made. Also, what programs do they offer for the public and students? Great start! V00d00Child (talk) 16:10, 22 February 2017 (UTC)

• The draft actually doesn't say anything about the AWF. The article doesn't really need to list the programs, but it needs verified information--but I think I said this four days ago already. Dr Aaij (talk) 03:52, 27 February 2017 (UTC)

adding citations ect

You should add an citation after the first line in the text about it being the biggest in the state, and the another reference after the short bio you have of the founders indicating where you got that info. (UTC) also add info about their conservation efforts here is a book I found that may help http://web.a.ebscohost.com/ehost/detail/detail?sid=94cd8184-20d1-4667-a24d-0e911b706134%40sessionmgr4009&vid=0&hid=4206&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d#AN=2W61289738701&db=nfhMwilli95 (talk) 16:40, 27 February 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for finding a link. I clicked it and read the article and realized that I have already used that as a reference. I did cite after the first line of text. I agree that I should have cited it. Thank you for your help. Shayes2 (talk) 16:34, 1 March 2017 (UTC)

• Shayes2, these links still need to be properly incorporated/footnoted. Dr Aaij (talk) 03:55, 6 April 2017 (UTC)