Talk:Akane Tsunemori/GA2
Latest comment: 9 years ago by ChrisGualtieri in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri (talk · contribs) 00:00, 24 January 2015 (UTC)
- I'll finish this. I'll do it myself this time, it has waited too long. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 00:00, 24 January 2015 (UTC)
- I did some fixing and helped add some context. There might be an actual issue - I have not seen the series and there is a second season that has been ongoing for some months that has not been included at all. This should be kept relatively up to date, but the omission of 11 episodes of (33) is now one third of the existing media. That is more than a minor issue at this point. Will place on hold. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 00:27, 24 January 2015 (UTC)
- Did some source checking and the claims were supported. I see you have started on the second season appearances and fixed that issue. The image use checks out per NFCC and that also meets requirements. The Reception section has extensive quotes when paraphrasing would suffice, but the use is clear and concise - it does present a 1a issue. This reference was broken - I just included the instructions on how to get to the information and corrected the link because it 404s otherwise. Otherwise all set. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:23, 31 January 2015 (UTC)