Talk:Airport racial profiling in the United States

Latest comment: 1 year ago by PrimeBOT in topic Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment

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The first sentence talks about government activity generally rather than specifically identifying what happens when someone is racially profiled at an airport.Marlenefine (talk) 16:52, 1 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

I enjoyed this article a lot - but I agree with Prof Fine, that the initial statement is too general, considering the information provided. Cdjsuarez (talk) 16:58, 3 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Good article- some suggestions: In the "In the United States" section, saying "our nation" is not objective.

The sentence in this section that begins "Despite..." could maybe be re-phrased- it's a little awkward.

Under the "Legality" section, the first sentence is posed as a question, which is a little awkward. Caleylynch4 (talk) 23:44, 4 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

I noticed the same as Caley. The question reads a bit awkward but overall great article. Michelle.K.Rico (talk) 14:12, 6 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Hey Denise, great article. NasroF (talk) 20:29, 26 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Great job on the article the only suggestion I would have would be to talk about how it could change within the next couple months. Symons2 —Preceding undated comment added 04:03, 6 May 2011 (UTC).Reply

Updates needed

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The most recent incident or quote is 2010, and a lot has happened in racial profiling since then. Little Will (talk) 14:23, 16 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: English 202A Writing in the Social Sciences

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 August 2022 and 9 December 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Charisse.v (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Katietull, LV565.

— Assignment last updated by Openskies789 (talk) 01:34, 31 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment

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  This article is the subject of an educational assignment at Simmons College supported by WikiProject United States Public Policy and the Wikipedia Ambassador Program during the 2011 Spring term. Further details are available on the course page.

The above message was substituted from {{WAP assignment}} by PrimeBOT (talk) on 16:35, 2 January 2023 (UTC)Reply