Hey Susko!

Sweet page.

I think I would say sedimentary basin instead of geologic structural basin just because I have never heard that term before and it sound vague. Also, the image's labels are too small and maybe some additional labels would be helpful, especially to show the west, east, and center units. I would put numerical values along with all geologic time periods to help readers who are not familiar with the geologic time scale. Ex. Miocene (23-5 mya). I would also give more detail on the west, east, and center units. A short section on each part would be ideal. For the tectonic history, I would use more specific titles. Ex. "Oligocene (34-23 mya) Normal Faulting". Is there any neat information about hydrocarbons or natural resources from the area? That would be ideal to include. Also, the word "extension" is misspelled in a title. Define geological jargon that may be confusing to non geologists. Ex. graben, pelagic, dip. Elaborate on the geochemical analyses from the last section, it does not say what the analyses show.

Cheers, Elly!