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Semi-protection: High level of IP vandalism. Bewakoofian (talk) 06:23, 20 September 2014 (UTC)

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Upon release, the film received mixed to positive reviews, with critics praising mainly Mahesh Babu's performance in the commercial entertainer. The Film got a minimum average rating of 3/5 from the critics. The film collected a record breaking $530,000 dollars in the USA premieres and also created a Day 1 record in some areas in Andhra.

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Saiprem83 (talk) 07:48, 20 September 2014 (UTC)

Any comments on this from other editors? — Martin (MSGJ · talk) 09:45, 22 September 2014 (UTC)

 Not done Indian cinema box office claims are highly unreliable, the major English language newspaper has discontinued their box office column because they cannot verify the claims [1] and this site has not established that it is more reliable. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 12:31, 23 September 2014 (UTC)

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Kodanda Ram Sompalli (talk) 09:51, 23 September 2014 (UTC)

 Not done Please do not repost the entire article here. Please make a specific suggestion of "Please change X to Y" or "Please add Z after this sentence." and include a reliably published source (such as a major newspaper, not a blog or celebrity gossip site) that supports your suggestion. -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 12:25, 23 September 2014 (UTC)

Are these numbers correct? Several papers except the ones supporting Maheshbabu stated that this movie flopped at boxoffice. It is the same story with Rabasa. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 107.10.140.17 (talk) 06:57, 3 October 2014 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Aagadu/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 15:26, 3 January 2016 (UTC)

I'll finish this one soon JAGUAR  15:26, 3 January 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

• "who is transferred to a village named Bukkapatnam as its circle inspector of police" - what is a circle inspector? Should it be police inspector?

Circle inspector is a police rank in India. I've wikilinked it.

• "Few song sequences were filmed in Ladakh, Switzerland and Ooty apart from Hyderabad and Bellary" - some

Done Rephrased.

• "However, the fact that Mallikharjun was a gay" - remove 'a'

Done Removed.

• "He is murdered by poisoning the food he ate" - by eating poisoned food

Done Rephrased.

• "by paying respect to Srihari whose succumbed to liver cancer on 9 October 2013" - who

Done Rephrased.

• " The makers preferred Hyderabad to Jammu & Kashmir and Rajastha" - to Jammu, Kashmir and Rajastha?

Jammu and Kashmir are not separate, they are one. Thus, i wrote The makers preferred Hyderabad to Jammu and Kashmir and Rajasthan for the remaining portions...

• "The song sequence and a fight were filmed in 23 days" - might sound better as Both the song and fight sequences were filmed in 23 days

Done Rephrased.

• "The manager lost his voice and the others developed severe headache" - headaches

Done Rephrased.

• "S. Thaman composed the film's music which marked his 50th film as a music director" - comma needed in between "music" and "which"

Done Added.

• "Aagadu was released in 100 screens across countries like Australia, United Kingdom, Switzerland, United Arab Emirates, etc. and the premieres" - sentence needs to split in between "etc" and "the". So it reads like etc. The premieres

Done Rephrased.

On hold

Very comprehensive article! Once all of the minor issues are addressed then this should be good to go. I'm surprised that this flopped in the box office, but it seemed to do well in the United States. JAGUAR  22:38, 3 January 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the review Jaguar. I've addressed your comments and i hope the article meets the GA criteria now. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 03:47, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for addressing them! This one is good to go. As usual, congratulations on promoting another Telugu film! JAGUAR  12:59, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

lang-en

@Ssven2 re this revert: Because this is the English Wikipedia, there is little or no need to identify specific English text both overtly and in the html markup as English text. See {{lang-en}}.

—Trappist the monk (talk) 15:34, 4 December 2017 (UTC)