Talk:A m'don/GA1
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Reviewer: Paparazzzi (talk · contribs) 23:29, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
- I'm failing this article because of the following points:
- "is a song recorded by Albanian singer and songwriter Elvana Gjata. The song was written by the aforementioned artist together with Albanian composer Arber Zeqo. Beside that it was produced by Albanian producer Arbre Blass, and both mastered and mixed by Swedish producer Johan Bejerholm." → is a song recorded by Albanian singer and songwriter Elvana Gjata. It was written by Gjata with Albanian composer Arber Zeqo, produced by Arbre Blass, and both mastered and mixed by Johan Bejerholm.
- Use Gjata instead of Elvana, since the surname it's preferred over the first name (see MOS:SURNAME)
- I'm not pretty sure if refs 2 and 3 are reliable
- Mention the date of release of the song, the format and possibly the label
- Its production was handled by Arbre Blass while being mastered and mixed by Johan Bejerholm. This sentence is unsourced
- The second paragraph of the Background section is not sourced
- "where it has since amassed more than 20 million views." and "It was directed by her recent collaborator"... see WP:RELTIME
- Wasn't this song reviewed by any publication? if not, that would say a lot about its notability
- Use ref. 1 as the source of the synopsis of the music video
- I'm not pretty sure the Albanian chart is reliable. It seems to be a chart from Top Channel, a television station, which would fall into WP:SINGLENETWORK
- Ref 6 does not back up any information to the article
- Ref 7 does not work
- Both the artwork and the music video picture need an Alt text
- I'm sorry, but this article still needs more work to be done to reach the GA status. Some sentences are unsourced, some sources are of doubtful reliability. The song apparently was not reviewed by any critic (which is fundamental to any music article) and there is no mention of any live performances for this song. If you want a guideline for a short, well-written and well sourced GA, read this article and use it as an example. As of now, I'm failing this nomination. Paparazzzi (talk) 00:53, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Paparazzzi: Anyways, Thank you for your time and review.--Lorik17 (talk) 10:22, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
- I'm sorry, but this article still needs more work to be done to reach the GA status. Some sentences are unsourced, some sources are of doubtful reliability. The song apparently was not reviewed by any critic (which is fundamental to any music article) and there is no mention of any live performances for this song. If you want a guideline for a short, well-written and well sourced GA, read this article and use it as an example. As of now, I'm failing this nomination. Paparazzzi (talk) 00:53, 19 April 2020 (UTC)