Talk:9.0: Live/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Rezter in topic GA Review

GA Review

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  • "9.0: Live is the first live album released by American metal band Slipknot. It was released on 1 November, 2005 by Roadrunner Records" - can you not use released twice? maybe just "first live album by American band..."?
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  • "The album was recorded during the band's world tour in support of their third studio album Vol. 3: (The Subliminal Verses) from 2004 to 2005." - commas around the album title, delink the years
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  • Every sentence in the lead starting with "the album" isn't pretty...
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  • Rolling Stone needs italics throughout (magazine; MOS:ITALICS).
  • Try and include all the reviews in the reception section in the infobox and vice versa.
  • "which was removed from Slipknot due to copyright reasons" - "due to copyright reasons" is poor wording... perhaps "due to copyright issues" (the "due" and "reasons" are somewhat redundant)
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  • Check italics for PopMatters.
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  • http://www.musicomh.com/albums/slipknot_1105.htm says it's rarely played live, not that it's never been played live ("as well as the first ever live performance of "Skin Ticket""). It also doesn't mention "Iowa" despite being the ref used for that statement.

And please leave me a note when done. Cheers, —Giggy 07:03, 11 July 2008 (UTC)Reply