Talk:3D Face Morphable Model

Latest comment: 2 days ago by HeyGio in topic Article review

some micro-level changes

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Hi@HeyGio! Thank you for your excellent work! I made some very littel-level changes in introduction: 1. "this enables" to "which enables," 2. "acquired by a 3D scanning procedure," to "acquired through a 3D scanning procedure," 3. "i.e.," to "such as" the corrected version may improving the clarity of expression. If you have any other thing please free to connect to me. Best regards, AzzurroLan AzzurroLan (talk) 12:47, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for the corrections! They were spot on! HeyGio (talk) 14:27, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Hi, nice to meet you!

Great work, it was even clear to an architect as myself!

In terms of structure of the article, I would suggest to just put the "History" paragraph before the one of modeling. It's a minor change actually, but it might help defining the context where the topic developed. Camilla.vi (talk) 13:31, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

I'm glad it was easy to understand! And thanks for the suggestion; I will consider moving the sections! HeyGio (talk) 14:29, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Made small changes, such as adding capitalization and WikiLeaks. Changed the image size (which was set to the explicit pixel size) and position. I would consider moving the History section before the Modeling section to make the most logical sense. Wikisosh (talk) 13:33, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for fixing the images! I will consider moving the sections! HeyGio (talk) 14:29, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply