Talk:36th Engineer Brigade (United States)/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Dana boomer in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

Hi! I will be reviewing this article for GA, and should have the full review up within a few hours. Dana boomer (talk) 18:42, 28 August 2008 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    • The third external link ("Lineage & Honors of the 36th") deadlinks for me.
    • In the lead, you say "command & control". Could this be "command and control", pretty please? *grin*
    • Lead, you say "brigade saw its role changed several times". Could this be "saw its role change"? I think either way is correct, but the second is easier to understand and looks less odd in a first reading, IMO.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    • The last two sentences of the first paragraph of the "Organization" section need a ref.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Overall, a nice article - I can't believe it has two failed reviews in the past few months - bad luck there! I am putting the article on hold to allow you time to deal with a couple of minor MOS/prose things and one referencing issue. If you have any questions, let me know here on the review page or on my talk page. Dana boomer (talk) 18:54, 28 August 2008 (UTC)Reply

Easy enough. It's done now, thanks for the quick review! -Ed!(talk)(Hall of Fame) 19:39, 28 August 2008 (UTC)Reply
Everything looks great, so I am passing the article. Thanks for the quick response! Dana boomer (talk) 19:50, 28 August 2008 (UTC)Reply