Talk:36th Engineer Brigade (United States)/GA1
Latest comment: 16 years ago by Dana boomer in topic GA Review
GA Review
editHi! I will be reviewing this article for GA, and should have the full review up within a few hours. Dana boomer (talk) 18:42, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- The third external link ("Lineage & Honors of the 36th") deadlinks for me.
- In the lead, you say "command & control". Could this be "command and control", pretty please? *grin*
- Lead, you say "brigade saw its role changed several times". Could this be "saw its role change"? I think either way is correct, but the second is easier to understand and looks less odd in a first reading, IMO.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- The last two sentences of the first paragraph of the "Organization" section need a ref.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Overall, a nice article - I can't believe it has two failed reviews in the past few months - bad luck there! I am putting the article on hold to allow you time to deal with a couple of minor MOS/prose things and one referencing issue. If you have any questions, let me know here on the review page or on my talk page. Dana boomer (talk) 18:54, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
- Easy enough. It's done now, thanks for the quick review! -Ed!(talk)(Hall of Fame) 19:39, 28 August 2008 (UTC)
- Everything looks great, so I am passing the article. Thanks for the quick response! Dana boomer (talk) 19:50, 28 August 2008 (UTC)