Talk:30 Minutes After Noon

Latest comment: 13 years ago by SuperMarioMan in topic GA Review
Good article30 Minutes After Noon has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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March 7, 2011Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 23:09, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 23:09, 5 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Here are the issues I found:

  • "while Virgil and Alan depart in Thunderbird 2 with brand-new fire-fighting apparatus" apparatuses here might be better, but apparatus is both singular and plural so it doesn't really matter either way.

Besides that, I didn't see any other problems. In fact, I liked this better than most other episode articles I've read since it hits on the themes and the technical nature of the episode itself, rather than cultural references and the like. As such, I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:13, 7 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your review and your kind words about the article. SuperMarioMan 01:26, 8 March 2011 (UTC)Reply