Talk:2C2P/Archive 1

notability, advert

This still reads like an ad, and quite a lot of the citations are tangential. Badly in need of more WP:CORPDEPTH - David Gerard (talk) 10:02, 23 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi David, thanks for reviewing my edits and for providing more detailed comments. Can i confirm the intro paragraphs are okay, but it's the 'Products and services' that requires edits, to not read like an ad? Kreen89 (talk) 10:41, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

David, i've found some time to edit the page based on your earlier comments. Would appreciate your thoughts to help improve the page even more. Thanks. Kreen89 (talk) 07:02, 4 December 2016 (UTC)