Talk:2023 Masters (snooker)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:55, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

Claiming — will do in the coming days. Pinging HurricaneHiggins for awareness as well. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:55, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Looking good. Lots of comma fixes, and reference 30 seems a bit incomplete and should be swapped out. That's it. Ping: HurricaneHiggins. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:38, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

Overview

• The tournament was broadcast live in the United Kingdom by BBC Sport, and in Europe by Eurosport. It was broadcast in China by China Central Television and Superstars Online, and streamed by Huya, Youku, Migu, Douyin, and Kuaishou. The commas after "BBC Sport" and "Superstars Online" are not needed (WP:CINS)
  • Done Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:10, 3 March 2024 (UTC)

Summary

• Robertson had chances in the tenth to force a deciding frame, but missed a key shot on the blue ball after potting the penultimate red CINS
• It was Allen's fifth consecutive first-round defeat since winning the tournament, and also made him CINS
• Williams won the seventh after a safety exchange on the last red, and won the eighth on the colours CINS
• Day led in the tenth, but missed the black after potting the last red CINS
• Day played a cannon into the pack while potting the black, but fouled when a red dropped into the middle pocket CINS
• Day could have won the match by clearing from the free ball, but missed his nominated brown to the middle pocket CINS
• Wilson won the next two frames with breaks of 90 and 81, and won the eighth on the colours to reduce his deficit to two frames. CINS
• he ran out of position in the fourth and Williams came from behind to win the frame with a 55 break CINS (after "fourth")
• Vafaei led in the seventh, but missed a shot on the yellow with the rest CINS
• Lisowski won the ninth after a safety exchange on the blue, and took the tent CINS
• Hawkins responded with a 110 century to win the second, and also took the third CINS
• Hawkins expressed frustration with his positional play, and said that Trump CINS
• Bingham won the first frame on the colours after a fluke on the green, and then made breaks CINS
• Bingham won the fifth after Murphy missed a red, and received 24 points CINS
• Lisowski led in the fourth frame, but played a poor safety shot CINS
• Lisowski had a chance to win the sixth on the colours, but played a poor positional shot to get on the brown. CINS
• Trump won the 45-minute fifth frame after safety battles on the yellow and blue, and won the sixth frame by potting the penultimate red and a green. CINS
  • I have done all of these. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:16, 3 March 2024 (UTC)

Sourcing and spot checks

• 9: No issues with the official list of rightsholders. Y
• 13: This looks right, but it's hard to interpret, probably also because of the seeding changes later.
• 27: Checks out (breaks of 104 and 108; 52, 65 and 99). Y
• 30: Is there an article with more information? A lot of stuff is missing, and the page is now a dead link. What's there is correct, but it doesn't verify all the material before the ref.
  • Oh, it's only because the archive is off. I've fixed this. Basically WST went to a new website, but, all of the old news URL have changed so they are completely different. The archive I've changed to is what we were sourcing. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:20, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
    • All good now. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 19:25, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
• 37: Match results and details all check out. Y
• 40: Trump quote is accurate. Y

Earwig flags quotes and some banal pieces or proper nouns like "at the mid-session interval" and "World Professional Billiards and Snooker Association" that can't be said to be original.

• You'd struggle to rewrite the name of an organisation in a different way. Meets WP:LIMITED. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:09, 3 March 2024 (UTC)

  Exactly. :) Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 19:24, 3 March 2024 (UTC)

Images

Promotional cover art/poster with valid NFUR. Encouragement: Add alt text.

• Should be all done Sammi Brie Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:20, 3 March 2024 (UTC)

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