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"The fixture was revealed on 11 December 2020, however it changed several times after that due to restrictions and border closures caused by the COVID-19 pandemic" → "The planned fixture was revealed on 11 December 2020; continued restrictions and border closures caused by the COVID-19 pandemic, however, forced it to change several times"
The way it's currently set up, "reigning premiers" feels a bit WP:EASTEREGGy to me; should mention earlier that Adelaide are the reigning champs
"for West Coast. Brianna" → "for West Coast, but three players suffered injuries:"
"This meant that" I'm a little confused about what "this" is supposed to mean; is it because it's a Western Derby?
"because a knife fell off" → "when a knife fell off"
Missing period after "four outs for round 2"
"wasn't considered too bad" → "was not considered a total failure"
"Parris Laurie and Andrea Gilmore played, after their injuries ended up not being serious" → "Parris Laurie and Andrea Gilmore's injuries were minor enough to allow them to return"
was also due to play her first game back from her knee injury, but was a late out due to her knee repetitive phrasing
I'm assuming "Grace Kelly" should be targeted towards Grace Kelly (footballer) and not the princess it currently links to
Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Please feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — GhostRiver22:58, 13 November 2021 (UTC)Reply