Talk:2019 Tour Championship/GA1

GA Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it verifiable with no original research?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Reviewer: HawkAussie (talk · contribs) 03:01, 12 July 2019 (UTC)

Lead

• See no issues here

First Round

• It's probably just me but you have the first round in this section and then in the draw you have the quarter-finals. Which is it
  • Same thing. An eight person tournament has the first round as the quarterfinal. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:30, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• Selby then won 6 frames - Possible change to Selby then won the next six frames.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:30, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...which included 3 centuries - Change the 3 to a three.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:30, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...match at 6–6. - Maybe change to six all.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:30, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• Selby then won frame 14 - Remove the word then.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:36, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...won 4 of the next 5 - won four of the next five.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:30, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• Wilson then captured the next three frames - Remove the word then
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:36, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Semi-finals

• ...best of 19 frame matches, played between two sessions, held between 21–22 March 2019 - Properly need to break that sentence there.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• In addition to the Masters, the two also met in the final of the 2018 Northern Ireland Open, Trump winning on both occasions. - Is this sentence really needed?
  • I think so. It's important that they had met in two finals of tournaments in the season prior to this match. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...tied the score at 1–1 - Change it to one all.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...won frames 3 and 4 - three and four not 3 and 4. That is also the same with frame five instead of frame 5.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...two of the next three frames to lead 8–5. O'Sullivan won both... - You could incorporate the previous sentence into the other one.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• I don't know if it's just me but that last frame seems to be a bit long to go WP:SUMMARY.
  • RS also go into large depth about this frame. Deciders are a big deal, especially winning a match on the final ball. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...won the next 5 frames - five instead of 5.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...to tie the match 6–6. - six all not 6-6.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:00, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Final

• ...match would also win the Coral Cup, awarded - Change this to "...match also won the Coral Cup"
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...tie the match 2–2 - two all
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...frames 5,6 and 7 - frame five, six and seven. This is also the same with frame 8 and 9 as they should be frame eight and nine.
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...to lead 7–5, and after the interval 8–6 - This is missing something here.
  • Not sure I see it, quite common to ignore frames where both players win one where it's unimportant. I've changed the wording, however. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...session to tie the match 8–8 - eight all not 8-8
  • Y Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• This is the same with 9-9 and 10-10 as they should be nine all and ten all.
  • Y for 9-9. MOS:NUM says 10 can be written either ten or 10. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
• ...the frame and tournament - the frame and the tournament.
  • Common wording to win frame and match as well as frame, match and tournament. "the" is just an added word Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:20, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Prize fund

• See no issues here

Coral Cup

• For all three events qualification was based on players - Missing a comma between events and qualification.

 Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 07:39, 12 July 2019 (UTC)

Final Comments

Reference 10 and 27 both have redirects as they are now in orange. The copyvio is only at 12% so that bit is fine. Other than that this probably needs a bit of work on it before I will be able to give this a GA. HawkAussie (talk) 02:35, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

EDIT: Just realized that the picture of Judd Trump might cause an issue in the future. I am just putting that up there.

This all seems very easy to fix. Shouldn't take long. I'll get on with it as soon as I can. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:28, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

I've fixed/commented on all of the above HawkAussie thanks for your speedy response. What is the issue with the Trump image? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:24, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Lee Vilenski This is because it has a personally rights warning isn't something that I rarely see. So when I saw that, I thought it could be a possible issue but I might just be over worrying about something. HawkAussie (talk) 23:01, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

HawkAussie, snooker images on commons are quite often like this, as - despite my atrempts- getting companies to release images so far hasn't worked. The image is properly attributed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 05:54, 17 July 2019 (UTC)

Lee Vilenski That does suck in a way, right looking through the rest of them, it's good to go for a GA. HawkAussie (talk) 00:19, 18 July 2019 (UTC)

- It's the bane of my life HawkAussie. Thank you for a prompt and hassle free GA review. Have a great day. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 06:43, 18 July 2019 (UTC)

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