Talk:2017 Buenos Aires ePrix

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Bcschneider53 in topic GA Review
Good article2017 Buenos Aires ePrix has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
June 12, 2017Good article nomineeListed
February 26, 2020Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:2017 Buenos Aires ePrix/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Bcschneider53 (talk · contribs) 04:19, 11 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

I'll take another Formula E article to try to trim down this Sports and Recreation backlog. Hope to have comments up within 24 hours. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 04:19, 11 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

No dab/external link issues.

Lead

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Background

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  • "Before the race e.Dams-Renault driver Sébastien Buemi" any reason not to link Buemi?
  • "his team's objective was to secure victory in Buenos Aires, accumulate as many possible points" I'd rewrite this to "his team's objective was to secure victory in Buenos Aires and accumulate as many possible points"

Practice and qualifying

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Race

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  • "The three drivers, who were allowed to use the boost, were determined by a fan vote." I don't think the commas are necessary here, though American and British English are different so don't worry if I'm mistaken.
  • "a 90 percent of change of rain was forecast before the event" Should this be "a 90 percent chance of rain"?
  • "while Vergne set the fastest lap of the race so far" "so far" makes this sound more like live commentary. Perhaps "while Vergne set what was at that point the fastest lap of the race"?
  • "Evans was issued with a five-second time penalty" I don't think "with" is necessary here.
  • "while Rosenqvist set the race's fastest lap (and overall track record) at one minute and 9.467 seconds" should this be noted as a "race" track record since they went faster in qualifying?

Post-race

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No issues in the Classification sections or references that I could spot. On hold for the standard seven days. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 23:11, 11 June 2017 (UTC)Reply