Talk:2015 Vuelta a España, Stage 1 to Stage 11/GA1

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Reviewer: Zwerg Nase (talk · contribs) 11:28, 4 October 2015 (UTC)Reply


Glad to review this. Zwerg Nase (talk) 11:28, 4 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Once more, very good article. I made some minor changes myself, so only a few things left to iron out:

  • Lead: Aru did not move back into the lead on stage 11, it was the first time he held the jersey.
  • Stage 1: Result table needs source.
  • Stage 7: The roads were up and down all day, though there were only two categorised climbs, both third category. Later you say the summit finish was a first category climb?
  • Stage 7: The most telling attack feels like editorializing to me, maybe you can find a different term?

That's everything I could find. Good work!! Placed on hold for now. Zwerg Nase (talk) 18:41, 4 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Super, Zwerg Nase, many thanks. I've fixed all of those. Note that I have, however, reverted one of your changes. I have debolded "2015 Vuelta a España" in the lead per WP:BOLDTITLE.
And one more thing I've learned about Wikipedia! Thanks! You're gonna have to revert that in the other one as well. Passed. Congrats! Zwerg Nase (talk) 19:44, 4 October 2015 (UTC)Reply