Talk:2010 Heluva Good! Sour Cream Dips 400/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Derild4921 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Derild4921☼ 21:53, 3 September 2010 (UTC) Back again! Seeing how this is a very old nominee I'll review this now. Derild4921☼ 21:53, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- I didn't even recongnize that I had another up for review. Humm? Nascar1996 22:35, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Well, it's from 2 months ago. lol. Derild4921☼ 22:37, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
- Sorry, I'll be out today for a soccer tournament. I'll be one tomorrow. Derild4921☼ 16:14, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
In depth review
edit- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- Lead has to be expanded as with the other NASCAR article you've written.
- Some terms and phrases are confusing such as "Three drivers had to move to the rear from a change after first practice". What is a "Change"?
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
Congrats! I have passed the article! Derild4921☼ 23:36, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Comments from other editors
edit- In the lead, it says claim his fourth win of the season for Hamlin in paragraph 2, yet in paragraph 3, it says Hamlin's fifth win of the season. Which is it? Either way, I would remove one of the mentions (I'd go for removing the one in paragraph 3) as they are redundant. Airplaneman ✈ 02:54, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
- Checklinks reveals one dead link, which I have tagged. Airplaneman ✈ 03:49, 5 September 2010 (UTC)