Talk:2010 Crown Royal Presents the Heath Calhoun 400/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Derild4921 01:32, 18 August 2010 (UTC) Hello, this is my first GA review so please remind me if I do anything wrong. Thanks!Reply

Ok, looking at the page now, it passes the quick-fail criteria and I will now conduct a full review. Derild4921 01:53, 18 August 2010 (UTC)Reply

In depth review

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  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
Only saw a typo NSD fixed
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
Free of OR, still checking rest
Conditions were clear with a high of 88 °F (31 °C), making the track potentially slippery.[14] Where in ref 14 does it say the track would become potentially slippery. Minor issue, but I don't get the concept and I also couldn't find it in the reference. Besides this it's fine.
(edit conflict)   Removed since it isn't stated by the source. ~NSD () 13:20, 18 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
Also, according to this, ref 2 is dead. Any alternative?
Didn't show up now. So I guess it was fixed. --Nascar1996 Contributions / Guestbook 13:18, 18 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
(edit conflict) That's because I replaced it. ~NSD () 13:20, 18 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
Ok, rest of the references look good so as soon as the lead is done I guess I can pass this. (A bit quick but I guess that's what happens with a well written article beforehand ;)) Derild4921 13:31, 18 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
  1. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Looking at some of your other GA's this article is fine.
  2. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
    No problem, free of POV
  3. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    No problem, editors working together fine.
  4. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    All are free use and there are enough in the article with captions
  5. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
Ok, after going through and having fixed up the minor issues I saw this article is now a GA! Derild4921 13:44, 18 August 2010 (UTC)Reply

Miscellaneous

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  • The lead is a bit on the short side. Maybe add in a paragraph on the background section and practice. Derild4921 13:14, 18 August 2010 (UTC)Reply
Compared to the other articles, such as 2010 Toyota/Save Mart 350, I will add a small race summary to the lead.--Nascar1996 Contributions / Guestbook 13:17, 18 August 2010 (UTC)Reply