Talk:2010 Chinese Grand Prix

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:58, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add a short description and then add WP:ALT text to every image.
• "Fernando Alonso for Ferrari, started from third, and passed" → "Fernando Alonso for Ferrari started from third and passed"
• Add a hyphen between "single seater".
• "Others teams in the field" → "Other teams in the field"
• "onto its flap and onto the" → "onto its flap and the"
• "Button used the soft compound tyres though an unbalanced car" - reword
• "Hisapnias" - typo?
• "Petrov took his first Formula One points finish in seventh" → "Petrov took his first Formula One points to finish in seventh"
• "the importance about changing" → "the importance of changing"
• "Domenciali" → "Domenicali"
• Add a comma after Luca Cordero di Montezemolo.
• "pleased duel other drivers" - reword
• "McLaren moved past Ferrari to become the new leaders" → "McLaren moved past Ferrari to become the new leader"
• Sources are archived.
• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:22, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
  • @Some Dude From North Carolina: Have made changes according to the queries raised above MWright96 (talk) 08:04, 20 July 2021 (UTC)

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by The C of E (talk) 15:08, 9 August 2021 (UTC)

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Jenson Button in 2010

• ... that Jenson Button (pictured) winning from Lewis Hamilton at the 2010 Chinese Grand Prix was the first one-two finish for British Formula One drivers in over a decade? Source: "Button and Hamilton closed up though they elected to be conservative and Button crossed the finish line after the 56th lap to take his second victory of the season and the ninth of his career." first Autosport website link. "Hamilton was 1.530 seconds behind in second to claim the first 1–2 finish for British drivers since Eddie Irvine and David Coulthard at the 1999 Austrian Grand Prix" The article cites an article in Autosport magazine, which I cannot directly access, but the statement can be verified through this second Autosport website link.

Buemi's Formula One car

• ALT1:... that both front wheels simultaneously detached from Sébastien Buemi's Formula One car (pictured) during free practice for the 2010 Chinese Grand Prix? Source: "With ten minutes remaining, the front wheels on Sébastien Buemi's Toro Rosso sheared under braking the turn 14 hairpin due to the right-front upright failing, causing the front-right wheel to break free. The front-left wheel followed suit when its upright section was suddenly forced to bear the entire load of the front. He was pitched into a gravel trap and a barrier at high speed. Although Buemi was unhurt, the FIA race director Charlie Whiting stopped the session for debris clearing and his teammate Jaime Alguersuari was kept in the garage while the team investigated the cause of the incident." BBC source

• Reviewed: This is my fourth nomination.
• Comment: Article was elevated to Good Article status on 20 July 2021. Use File:Jenson Button 2010 Malaysia.jpg with the caption "Jenson Button in 2010" for first hook. Use File:Buemi Chinese GP qualy 2010 (cropped).jpg with the caption "Buemi's Formula One Car" for alt hook.

Improved to Good Article status by MWright96 (talk). Nominated by HumanBodyPiloter5 (talk) at 12:32, 25 July 2021 (UTC).

• This is my first DYK review but I see no issues with the article, either hook is acceptable (assumed good faith with first hook as I don't have an Austosport subscription but BBC source verifies alternative suggested). Both images are freely licensed.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Stevie fae Scotland (talk) 14:05, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

ALT1 is directly contradicted by the text cited as proving it. If "The front-left wheel followed suit", then the shearing off of the wheels was not simultaneous. Kevin McE (talk) 14:37, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

From the perspective of a human timescale it was simultaneous. There were probably milliseconds separating the points in time where the two wheels came off. HumanBodyPiloter5 (talk) 21:15, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

Official footage which shows it was effectively simultaneous. HumanBodyPiloter5 (talk) 01:24, 6 August 2021 (UTC)

If event B happens as a physical consequence of event A, then A and B are not simultaneous. That word is an absolute, not a perception. Kevin McE (talk) 13:59, 6 August 2021 (UTC)