Talk:2010 Brazilian Grand Prix

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Bcschneider53 in topic GA Review

Buemi/Sutil

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Sébastien Buemi and Adrian Sutil were given five-place grid penalty each according to the notes below the qualification table. If so, why their grid position is only four places higher than actual position? 82.141.93.136 (talk) 16:53, 8 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

Simple. Buemi's penalty was applied first, and as he moved down, Sutil moved up one spot. Sutil's penalty applied, Buemi moved up one spot and thus both only lost four spots on the grid as per here. Cs-wolves(talk) 17:01, 8 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Bcschneider53 (talk · contribs) 17:14, 2 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this one. Comments to follow soon. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 17:14, 2 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR): {{GAList/check|}y}
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • "Jenson Button, Hamilton's teammate, was mathematically eliminated from retaining the championship" Suggest making it more clear that Button was the defending champion

Background

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  • "with 231 points; ahead of Red Bull's Mark Webber" think a comma is more appropriate here, or perhaps even nothing at all

Practice

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  • No major issues that I can see.

Qualifying

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Post-qualifying

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  • "Kovalainen 20th and Di Grassi 21st" small d in "di Grassi."

Race

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  • ALT text for images might be good if you have FAC aspirations, but not a requirement here by any means.
  • "Schumacher fell to tenth by driving onto the grass" was this a driver's error or was he forced onto the grass?
  • "the Grand Prix's sole safety car deployment:" I'd change this to a simple period but feel free to ignore this one if you like it as is.

Post-race

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  • Just a note, I've boldly tweaked the captions to ensure the parentheses are non-italics, feel free to tweak further
  • Refs, images look good, no dab or external link issues.

Really just some minor prose stuff here. Should be simple fixes. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 16:21, 6 May 2020 (UTC)Reply