Talk:2009 Price Chopper 400

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GA Review

Latest comment: 5 years ago7 comments2 people in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:2009 Price Chopper 400/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 04:23, 28 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

Lead

in Kansas City, Kansas, at Kansas Speedway --> at Kansas Speedway
before a crowd of 100,000 attendees --> before a crowd of 100,000 spectators
from the fifth position --> starting fron the fifth position
The track is one of ten intermediate to hold NASCAR races - This line seems redundant and needs to be removed .
because he finished seventh - Who finished seventh ? and where did the other finish ?
- Have done all apart from remove Kansas City, Kansas from the lead paragraph because it needs to be remain in order to inform the general reader as to where exactly the track is based. MWright96 (talk) 07:39, 2 May 2019 (UTC)Reply
  - @Kpgjhpjm: Been ten days since my last reply. Is there anything else that needs addressing? MWright96 (talk) 19:07, 12 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

Background

; the others are --> with the others being .
opposite of the front --> opposite to the front
The Manufactuers' Championship could have been sealed in Kansas in the event the highest-placed Chevrolet driver finished ahead of the highest-placed Toyota competitor --> The Manufactuers' Championship could have been sealed in Kansas if the highest-placed Chevrolet driver finished ahead of the highest-placed Toyota competitor

Practice and qualifying

No issues

Race

By lap 23, Earnhardt had a 1.9 second lead over Keselowski. - When did Keselowski pass Martin ?
On the 37th lap, Johnson passed McMurray for third, as Stewart and Martin passed McMurray for fourth and fifth three laps later - Needs to be reworded
Three laps later, Gordon passed Kahne to take fourth, and Marcos Ambrose lost the tenth position to Kahne . Needs to be fixed.
Biffle made a fast restart to get ahead of Biffle and Johnson and move into second . Needs to be fixed

Images

All the images seem to be okay .

Post-race

No issues

Comments

@MWright96: The review is completed now . Kpgjhpjm 02:17, 13 May 2019 (UTC)Reply
- @Kpgjhpjm: All of the above subsequent points have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 05:57, 13 May 2019 (UTC)Reply
  - @MWright96: I will be making some edits before promoting and please fix this Biffle then passed Biffle . Kpgjhpjm 13:29, 13 May 2019 (UTC)Reply
    - @Kpgjhpjm: The extra error you have noted has been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 18:50, 18 May 2019 (UTC)Reply

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