Talk:2007 UAW-Ford 500

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Kpgjhpjm in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 04:23, 7 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Let us review this NASCAR article

Lead edit

  • Change as the new leader of restrictor plate wins to as the driver with the most restrictor plate wins with twelve
  • After the sentence Johnson was still leading as the final lap began add but and remove the full stop .

Background edit

  • Add space between Nextel Cup Series and and
  • Remove the word and between fifth and Kyle Busch .
  • Increased horsepower from 75 to 80 or increase by 75 to 80 .

Practice and Qualifying edit

  • Change held the Friday before Sunday's race to held on Friday
  • The redlink to 2005 Pocono 500 is not required.
  • Change mandated to start 41st and 42nd to mandateed to start at the back . Kpgjhpjm 15:25, 8 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Race edit

  • It is the first mention of McMurray, so change his name to full and link him .
  • Remove the words of cars .
  • Remove the words a narrow margin
  • Change .Hamlin took the lead to and he took the lead
  • Johnson was leading on lap 21 , but Hamlin restarted in the lead on lap 22 - Did Johnson make a pit stop.
  • lost the first position to lost the lead
  • Weird sentence - Stewart moved past Sadler on the 133rd lap after receiving assistance from Stewart. This needs to be fixed .
  • Change Then Labonte to Then he
  • Petty's left or right rear blew . If there is no information write Petty's tire blew

Post-Race edit

  • No issues

Comments edit

  • @MWright96: On-Hold for now , when these issues are fixed , I will take a final look . The article is solid , though . Kpgjhpjm 15:31, 9 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
    • {reply|Kpgihplm}} Thanks for the review. Everything has been addressed apart from the McMurray query because he is already mentioned and linked in the practice and qualifying sub-section. MWright96 (talk) 18:12, 9 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
      • @MWright96: Promoting, thanks for another solid article. But please be more careful with your pings . Kpgjhpjm 03:01, 10 August 2018 (UTC)Reply