GA Review edit

I will be reviewing this article for GA status, thanks!--Finalnight (talk) 14:43, 15 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

Looks like Finalnight isn't going to do it, so... edit

Here goes... Plasticup T/C 16:55, 18 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)

The article's biggest weakness is its prose. It needs a good firm review, especially the lead. That said, it easily passes GA.

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    The lead needs be much smoother before FAC. e.g. starting a paragraph with a pronoun.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    Plasticup T/C 17:08, 18 July 2008 (UTC)Reply