Talk:2004–05 Arsenal F.C. season/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Casliber in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 11:47, 12 October 2015 (UTC)Reply


Right, I will take a look at this, make straightforward copyedits as I go (please revert if I accidentally change the meaning!) and jot questions below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:47, 12 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

  • I'd tack the lone sentence at the bottom of the lead onto the end of the first para. Isolated sentences look choppy.
  • ...reinforced Chelsea's position in first - sounds like a gear...I'd go with "reinforced Chelsea's position at the top of the table"
  • Background section has no inline cites

Otherwise looks ok. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:56, 12 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Thank you very much for taking a look at this. Have made corrections. Lemonade51 (talk) 20:08, 12 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Also, Earwig's copyvio checker passed ok.

1. Well written?:

Prose quality:  
Manual of Style compliance:  

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:

References to sources:  
Citations to reliable sources, where required:  
No original research:  

3. Broad in coverage?:

Major aspects:  
Focused:  

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:

Fair representation without bias:  

5. Reasonably stable?

No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):  

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:

Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  


Overall:

Pass or Fail:   - all good Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 10:01, 13 October 2015 (UTC)Reply