Talk:2003 BDO World Darts Championship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 08:45, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• Infobox could use a 2003 in front of "Embassy World Darts Championship"
• "It is one of two world championships in the game of darts:" "as of"?
• " in Frimley Green, Surrey and " comma after Surrey.
• "27 players automatically " avoid starting sentences with a number.
• " at Bridlington Spa, Bridlington on " comma before "on".
• "quarter and semi-finals" quarter-
• "Spa, Bridlington on" comma before "on" again.
• " held to the best-of-five sets." again, seems odd to me, "held as"..?
• "(x2) do you mean "×2"?
• "Martin Adams (pictured in 2012) was eliminated in the second-round of the competition" full stop.
• "Two double one ring " etc. Should this really be "Two double-one-ring-finishes" etc?
• "unable to challenge Van Barneveld during the game" not really, he challenged him, but not very well, re-word.
• "when the referee called for a sudden death " it sounds like the ref just did this, perhaps "referee confirmed a sudden death" or something, he was just following the rules, right?
• Check all image captions, if they're complete sentences, add a full stop.
• "9 Dart Checkout" why the caps?
• "Finalists (x2)" de-cap and use multiplication sign.
• Eric is Erik.

Decent article, so this is it for a first pass. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 20:13, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

• • @The Rambling Man: Have made the changes requested MWright96 (talk) 06:31, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Okay, missed the multiplication symbol one (better for you to check each thing off individually) but it looks okay now, so I'm promoting. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:33, 6 April 2020 (UTC)