Talk:1st Ski Division (Wehrmacht)

Latest comment: 13 years ago by 84.23.155.88 in topic Photo caption

Suggestions for improvement

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  • Referencing: the article needs at least one in line citation per paragraph for a B class rating;
  • Coverage: the article mentions when the unit was formed, but when was it disbanded, or what was its fate?
  • Structure: the article could be broken up into a more defined structure with an introduction and then a body/main;
  • Grammar: the article needs a copy edit for grammar and irregular capitalisation;
  • Supporting materials: an image or infobox would fulfil this criteria.

Just a few ideas. Hope this helps. Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 14:52, 2 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

Photo caption

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The last point above has been addressed with the addition of a picture (usually welcome), but, it is "dated 1942 in Norway".
The article states that this division fought on the Eastern Front from 1944.
So, is use of this picture acceptable?

RASAM (talk) 21:00, 5 October 2010 (UTC)Reply

No! The picture is of a German gebirgsjäger with skis, not of a skijäger. It should be removed. 84.23.155.88 (talk) 20:10, 24 November 2010 (UTC)Reply