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Latest comment: 12 days ago by Ss112 in topic Direct quotes in composition section
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Direct quotes in composition section
editMost of the nonsensical, silly PR descriptions for what the lyrics of the songs "depict" are direct quotes from the label that are copypasted into K-pop media articles that report on artists' releases. This should be made clear:
the lyrics describe a space that gradually expands into dots, lines, and planes, like different dimensions
– What?the lyrics compare the relationship with an old lover to 'cheese', and the song breaks abruptly when it is cold, but stretches out when it is hot
– nonsensical. How is a song "hot" or "cold"?expressing honest emotions in the face of distorted reality. It contains the paradoxical desire to live calmly with hope, even if it is hidden
– what's paradoxical about living with hope and calmly?a praise for youth that everyone can become the protagonist of their own life and achieve their dreams
– a "praise" for youth? Nonsensical.the lyrics express the ambition to break away from universal standards and live according to Peter Pan, the 'romantic' in his heart
– nonsensical PR speak.the lyrics contain the story of the moment when a soulmate is miraculously reunited in the middle of the universe
– if this is some concept the EP has, that should be made clear.
All of these should either be worded neutrally (WP:NEUTRAL) or put between quotation marks as otherwise this is a WP:COPYVIO concern and I will raise this with an admin, as I do with most copyright violations I find. Ss112 08:51, 8 June 2024 (UTC)