Talk:1993 Pacific hurricane season/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• "This activity was the result of an El Niño event, which is the main factor contributing to above-average activity across the Pacific basin.[1] " does anyone actually consider 1993 an El Nino today? I know one tried during the spring but CPC's ONI index never got to official Nino territory at least? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• "Tropical Storm Barbara produced heavy rainfall and downed trees across Southern Mexico, causing 6 fatalities." wrong storm :P YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• Please add stuff from the MWR, even if you're not going to do a seasonal summary section. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• Should note, seasonal summary if not lead, how the season compares to average. I know that information gets kinda repetitive after a while but season articles were meant to be more than a list of storms. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
• Should add ACE, at least on a seasonal basis, especially given the high ACE of 1993. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• Totally optional but I'd like to see a pic of Kenneth and Lidia at the same time since they were instantaneous DT of T7.0's six hours apart. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• Beatriz needs to be redirected. Would say merged but uhh there's nothing to merge in. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• Can you mention directional changes or try to mention why the storm's moved the way they did more often in general? You don't need to be multiple paragraphs but this is kinda a boring read for a season with so many strong storms, and the sections are shorter than that of many passed seasonal GA's for how long some of the storms were (Kenneth's section despite being a near Category 5 is one line longer than Max's and Greg's is only a few lines longer than Max's despite its very long duration). In terms of mentioning intensity changes, you do a much better job covering why they occurred but there are still some omissions. Examples of what could be added (to make this easier for you and I tried to make sure this information was available because I don't want to torture you) include:

• • Mentioning Dora sustained its peak for 24 hours? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• • Note how/why Eugene's track shifted from westward to suddenly northward to westward. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• • Note how Keoni weakened before crossing the international dateline. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• • Mention Greg's secondary peak. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• • Mention how Greg's track shifted westnorthwest and then to the west. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• • Mention Greg's overall resistance to weakening. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• • Mention that Jova re-strengthened after its first peak and how/why it did. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• • Mention how Kenneth's track kept shifting from westward to northwestward. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• • Mention when Kenneth's eye formed and dissipated. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• "As Tropical Storm Nora developed to its east, the small system began to be absorbed by the larger circulation," Norma not Nora :P YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

• Be consistent with mentioning states when mentioning Mexican cities. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

The article is very well written just a little lacking content wise, but I made it so that it's relatively easy to fix. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:40, 10 January 2022 (UTC)

Yellow Evan, I have addressed these comments. 1993 isnt officially recognized as an El Nino today since there were only four consecutive ONIs, not five. It was then though, as indicated by the source. There's no reliable reference for EPAC ACE. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 20:36, 10 January 2022 (UTC)