Talk:1993 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 00:00, 1 January 2013 (UTC) Doing... I will be doing the review.
- Why do you mention so much on Emily in the lead? This is not the EPAC, landfalls are not that important. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:00, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- "Tropical Depression One and Hurricane Emily also caused land impacts. However, the storm collectively caused 339 deaths and $302.7 million in damage.[8][9][10][11][12][13][14][15][16][7][17][18][19][20]" why so many refs? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- Also, shouldn't the timeline graph be in the SS not the storms. I hate blank sections. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- Optional, but I would delink the storm names per WP:OVERLINKING. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- "In El Salvador, rainfall from the precursor tropical wave caused mudslides throughout the country, which in turn resulted in 20 fatalities. Immense amounts of precipitation in Mexico caused flooding in the states of Veracruz, Campeche, Yucatán, San Luis Potosí, Quintana Roo, Nuevo León, and Jalisco. 5 deaths and $33 million in damage was reported in Mexico.[16][30] " IIRC IDD says $1 bil combined with Arlene. I also recall Hink telling me something about the Dartmouth flood observatory here related to this damage, so you might wanna check that. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- Nope, I checked the Dartmouth archive and there was nothing about $1 billion in damage. Now Tropical Storm Beatriz apparently caused $1.7 billion, which may have been in combination with Arlene. However, I don't know how reliable the source is and cannot find anything else to back it up.--12george1 (talk) 04:09, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
- "10 fatalities were reported in Nicaragua, 9 of which were drowning victims after a Spanish vessel sank. Overall, Tropical Storm Bret caused 184 deaths and about $25 million in damage.[7]" don't start a sentence with a number. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- In Cindy's section, I'd put the 2.75 inches in 6 min total as well as mention the 15.55 occrued in only six hours (Which is actually 15.6 per the featured storm article). YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- "1,000 mbar " why the comma? There is no comma in the infobox, right. YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- "though it weakened back early " to what? my underpants? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- "While passing southeast of Newfoundland, the storm produced very light rainfall in some areas.[53]" how light? 0.01 inch? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- "moved north-northwest at 6 to 11 mph (9.7 to 18 km/h)" why the wind speed? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- " Impact from the depression in Bermuda was nil." why do you mention it then? I could say Ten had no affect on sports teams, but what would did say? YE Pacific Hurricane 02:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)