Talk:1981 Peach Bowl (January)/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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The article is actually really good, there's only a few minor things I'd like to see fixed:

  • Write an article on the December Peach Bowl (can be a substub, so long as the article exists). Taken care of.
  • Can the image Image:1970s_Peach_Bowl_logo.jpg be reduced in size? 500x417 is rather big for a logo that only needs to be maybe half that size. Taken care of, nevermind.
  • Make sure football players with articles are linked (i think i got most of them)
  • "From there, it took Miami just four plays to score. Roan ran for seven yards, Kelly completed an 11-yard pass, threw an interception, then Hobbs ran 12 yards for the touchdown." I assume you meant incompletion as opposed to interception? If not I presume the interception was negated somehow, which would need a mention.
  • Thanks for the catch. It was an incomplete pass.
  • In the statistical section, you have Miami with 3 turnovers, VT with 1. Elsewhere in the article it says Miami turned it over 4 times, and you mention at least 2 VT interceptions.
  • Great catch! For whatever reason, my copy of the box score only lists Casey's interception for Tech and doesn't mention Lawrence's errant pass. It's there in the play-by-play, but not in the statistical summary. Interesting. I checked it against my copy of the game tape, though, and the Washington Post story is correct -- Miami had four turnovers and Tech two, off of the two interceptions. JKBrooks85 (talk) 22:18, 5 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

Besides that stuff, this article's well written. The three things left are all minor stuff so getting it handled shouldn't be an issue. Wizardman 19:16, 5 October 2008 (UTC)Reply

Well, I have no other issues with the article, so I'll gladly pass it now. :) Wizardman 00:10, 6 October 2008 (UTC)Reply