Talk:1980 (album)

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Isento in topic "Turning Corners"
Good article1980 (album) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
March 4, 2019Good article nomineeNot listed
July 20, 2019Good article reassessmentNot listed
April 3, 2020Good article nomineeListed
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:1980 (Gil Scott-Heron and Brian Jackson album)/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 17:12, 2 April 2020 (UTC)Reply


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Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed
  • Sources look good, AGF on copyvio and OR bc tools are down; sources are reliable and quotes are correctly attributed
  • Infobox and cover good
  • One commons image - suitable
  • Could the quote box be made wider?
  • Other tables as standard
  • Lead a good length
  • History and talk show it's stable
  • Follows album MOS
  • Article title is a bit unwieldy, is it unable to just be 1980 (album)?
  • Is past in their past jazz-funk style supposed to be 'post'?
  • Sufficient lead
  • produced by them both sounds informal, could 'them' be removed, or some other phrasing used?
  • Ok, both past and custom modular synthesizers - I don't know what 'past' is doing here, if it means something special it needs a wikilink
  • In The title track voices, I know it's obvious but I think it should have "1980" included
  • Could there be a ref after 'computer technology' - end of sentence with quotes in
  • And again after 'uncertain decade'

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"Turning Corners"

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I owe you an apology Tbhotch. Turns out there was a reliable source with some background information connected to this album: Pieces of a Man, "Turning Corners" chapter. I'll be adding to it from there soon. isento (talk) 04:01, 15 March 2021 (UTC)Reply