Talk:1973 Taiyo Department Store fire

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Boneyard90 in topic Sentence

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This is the translation of the Japanese version of Taiyo Department Store fire. Various data come from the single reference. I personally experienced at the nearest National Kumamoto Hospital and I agree with the description of newspapers. I am asking Kumamoto Nichinichi Shimpun (newspaper) for photographs. (--Ichiro Kikuchi (talk) 01:00, 19 November 2009 (UTC))Reply

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I overhauled the article for readability, but I had to completely delete this sentence from the analysis section, as it didn't make any sense to me:

The author studied the number of dead persons and their places and found that the behaviour of persons was closely related to the places and number of dead persons.

Boneyard90 (talk) 20:11, 5 February 2012 (UTC)Reply