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"The 1960 Texas tropical storm brought severe local flooding to southeastern Texas in June 1960." to "The 1960 Texas tropical storm brought severe but localized flooding to southeastern Texas in June 1960."
"Elsewhere, light to moderate rainfall was recorded in at least 11 other states" no need for elsewhere if you mention the number of states. YEPacificHurricane 18:43, 8 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
" Over Texas, airborne radars and the Dow Chemical Company radar in Freeport indicated curved convective banding associated with the storm" link to radar. YEPacificHurricane 18:43, 8 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
" It was reported by the Bay City Tribune that all of Matagorda County was "under water".[7] " italize newspapers. YEPacificHurricane 18:43, 8 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
"Several shingles were blown off the roof of a house, and then water caused the roof to collapse into the dining room and living room. However, no one was injured or killed.[3] Several hundred people were evacuated from places with poor drainage or low-lying areas.[7] " you start back to back sentences with "Several". `YEPacificHurricane
I think the former should start with "Many" while the latter should stay with "Several".--12george1 (talk) 20:46, 8 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
"Elsewhere on the Gulf Coast of the United States," "on" to "along". YEPacificHurricane 18:43, 8 June 2013 (UTC)Reply