Talk:1935 Yangtze flood

Latest comment: 1 month ago by 2001:8003:6C15:9B00:7DC9:136:A2F3:CAD0 in topic Poorly written

Poorly written edit

The flow and wording of this article are poor. Repetitive and superfluous phrases ought to be cleaned up. Edit for readability. 47.208.0.117 (talk) 03:29, 10 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Constant uses of the phrase "this is because". In parts in back to back sentences. Very poorly written 2001:8003:6C15:9B00:7DC9:136:A2F3:CAD0 (talk) 06:09, 6 April 2024 (UTC)Reply