Talk:1924 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Heavy rainfall was reported in Mexico.[1]" why is "rainfall" linked? Did you forget the MOS? :P YE Pacific Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
- "The storm tracked northeastward," to "The storm tracked northeast,". YE Pacific Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
- "The cyclone strengthened to a peak intensity of 135 mph (215 km/h) north of Grand Bahama on August 24." why does the infobox say 100 knots then? YE Pacific Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Damage was minimal" you just said there was no damage! YE Pacific Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Most of Brownton, Georgia was destroyed by floods.[8]" get rid of the redlink. YE Pacific Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Ship observations were sparse in tracking the storm. It was last observed on September 22.[2]" combine these two sentences. YE Pacific Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
- "Early on October 12, the sixth tropical cyclone of the season developed in the eastern Gulf of Mexico " delink GOM as you link it in previous section. YE Pacific Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
- "It quickly weakened and made landfall Southwest Florida near Naples, Florida as a Category 1 hurricane.[11] " "Landfall Southwest"? forgot a word? :P YE Pacific Hurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
- Guess I don't practice what I preach? :P --12george1 (talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)