Talk:1912 Jamaica hurricane
Latest comment: 7 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review
1912 Jamaica hurricane has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: November 5, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 03:28, 28 September 2016 (UTC)
I'll review it over the weekend.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 03:28, 28 September 2016 (UTC)
- Isn't Cuba one of the areas impacted? It should be in the infobox.
- "However, several banana plantations reported losses as high at 60% individually. The United Fruit Company sustained heavy losses due to the damage to banana trees." Can this sentence be merged?
- "Conditions on the island worsened as the hurricane neared the coast, as railway lines were heavily damaged by the winds and rain." Probably shouldn't use "as" multiple times in a sentence.
That's all I've got for now in terms of prose.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 04:33, 24 October 2016 (UTC)