Talk:1842 Atlantic hurricane season

GA Review

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Reviewer: TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contribs) 00:58, 4 January 2017 (UTC)

• "Many ships and their crews were lost to the storm as it crossed the Gulf of Mexico, before finally striking northern Mexico on September 8." - Mmm, I don't like how this reads for whatever reason. Use a semicolon to break it into two, add a pronoun in the latter part of the sentence, or something?
• "The storm moved very slowly, and sank or impaired numerous ships along its course." - Nein comma.
• "Accompanied by significant damage, both along the coast and inland, this storm is considered an historical analogue to Hurricane Vince of 2005." - A historic, not an historic.
• "Described by one writer as "one of the worst in the history of coastal Carolina", - Comma inside quotation, m8. Always.
• "Extensive flooding in Washington, D.C., turned Pennsylvania Avenue into "a broad river" and inundated homes and cellars, with losses in the city estimated at $50,000 (1842 USD)." - Don't think a comma is necessary after "D.C." unless we're back to that weird rule that I don't understand.
• "Streets, wharves, shipyards and lumberyards in Baltimore were submerged" - Comma after shipyards.
• "The storm subsequently followed an unusual path due westward across the Gulf of Mexico." - That doesn't strike me as particularly unusual?

That's about it. Nice job on the article. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 00:58, 4 January 2017 (UTC)

I've made the suggested changes. Thanks for the speedy review! – Juliancolton | ^Talk 02:03, 4 January 2017 (UTC)