Talk:1812 Louisiana hurricane

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 22:38, 21 December 2012 (UTC)

Review

Lead

• Lead is too short. It should be expanded.
  • Done. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 05:15, 23 December 2012 (UTC)

History

• "the storm's track track" repeat? or this is deliberate?
  • Well fuck me :( --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 05:15, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
    • I didn't meant to be rude :(... — ΛΧΣ²¹ 05:28, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
• "becoming the closest major hurricane to New Orleans" This is covered by reference #2?
  • In the opening line of ref 2 - "Historical data, consisting of diaries, ship logbooks, ship protests, and newspapers, reconstruct the path, intensity, and societal impacts of a major hurricane in 1812 that is the closest known storm to pass New Orleans". --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 05:15, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
    • Oh yes it is lol. The issue is that I had my pdf plugin damaged and couldn't see the document :( — ΛΧΣ²¹ 05:28, 23 December 2012 (UTC)

Impact

• The first line of impact is too short to be separated, I guess. Can't it be merged?
  • It's a very distinct area though from the rest of the article. I think it should be separate. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 05:15, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
    • Fair enough :) — ΛΧΣ²¹ 05:28, 23 December 2012 (UTC)

Everything else looks fine. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 22:38, 21 December 2012 (UTC)