Talk:177th Fighter Aviation Regiment PVO/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Kges1901 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:23, 20 December 2017 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:23, 20 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

  • No DABs, external links OK.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • an aviation regiment of the Soviet Air Defense Forces Fighter needs to be linked somewhere in the lede, so change aviation to fighter and link it here.
  • Link interceptor, squadron, flight, Lenino station, political officer, ace, Warsaw, Anju, fighter-bomber, bomber
  • Always identify what kind of aircraft it is on first reference. Forex Ju 88 bomber, etc. And add manufacturer as well. Forex Lockheed F-80 Shooting Star.
  • regiment received a squadron of 15 pilots from Should probably rephrase as "received 15 pilots as reinforcements from..." unless they came over as a complete squadron. If they did, what happened to the other squadrons, were they disbanded?
  • This was a complete squadron of MiG-3 qualified pilots, I believe, based on my interpretation of the cited Osprey book, presumably transferred to the 177th to assist with the conversion to the MiG-3. According to Bykov's IAP book, the 27th had begun receiving MiG-3s before late July. Kges1901 (talk) 02:54, 30 December 2017 (UTC)Reply
  • What were the designations of the squadrons?
  • Squadrons of aviation regiments were designated 1st, 2nd and 3rd Aviation Squadrons, and so on. Kges1901 (talk) 02:54, 30 December 2017 (UTC)Reply
  • Link all ranks on first use.
  • main People's Liberation Army Navy at Dalian. Missing word?
  • What kind of external tanks?
  • Indicate what country the airbases were in in the Korean War section.
  • Sabre pilot supercharging his engine Impossible to supercharge a turbine. What do you mean here?
  • three squadrons fought in 24 January engagement with around Missing words?
  • disbanded during the reform of the Russian Air Force Awkward, try "disbanded during the reformation of the Russian Air Force"--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:46, 30 December 2017 (UTC)Reply
    • I think that squadron is the only needed link that you forgot. Take care of that and we'll be done here.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:43, 30 December 2017 (UTC)Reply