Talk:165 West 57th Street/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Short description goes at the top.
• Move "Use mdy dates" below the hatnote.
• Add alt text to every image being used.
• Remove the space between "second- and".
• Add "the" before "United States" (both times).
• Don't use colons for the sentence starting with "in addition".
• "in a different manner" → "differently" (less wordy)
• "cornice is a" → "cornice are a"
• "moved out the building" → "moved out of the building"
• "at the ground story" → "on the ground story"
• "five disabled students taking class" → "five disabled students taking classes"
• "tiles and new signage was added" → "tiles and new signage were added"
• "in a manner similar to" - kinda wordy.
• Wikilink The New York Times and Raymond Ericson.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I have fixed all of these now. Epicgenius (talk) 01:27, 8 July 2021 (UTC)

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