Talk:1.000.000 (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 04:45, 16 September 2016 (UTC)

Will get to this within the next two days. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 05:55, 17 September 2016 (UTC).

Initial comments

• Only the original release's "Label" should be mentioned in the infobox, and in this case, it is "Vae Victus" and "E2"

 Done

• Genre in the infobox?

 Done Did as you said.

• Please list full names for the "Producer(s)" in the infobox

 Done

• "made available for" --> "made available as a"

 Done

• Usually "solely" is a term for just one person/thing

 Done

• "Stan's manager and collaborator Marcel Prodan suggested her to collaborate with Carlprit after they have worked together at some point.[1] The rapper has also been previously involved in a remix of the singer's "Mr. Saxobeat" (2011).[2]" --> "After Carlprit's involvement with Stan in a remix of her 2011 single "Mr. Saxobeat",[2] Stan's manger and collaborator Marcel Prodan suggested that the pair work together in the future, which would result in "1.000.000".[1]"
• "while being solely produced by Prodan and Nemirschi.[4]" --> Same as a I mentioned above

 Done

• Genre could be pop I think

 Done

• "labeling" --> "labelling" (Traditional English is being used here, not American English)

 Done

• "German portal Mix1 expected the single to become a hit and rated it 6/8." --> "German portal Mix1 expected the single to become a hit and awarded it a score of 6 out of 8."

 Done

• "On native" --> "On her native"

 Done

• "in forty-eight hours straight" --> "in a span of forty-eight hours"

 Done

• I'm not 100% sure if the photo of Stan's shoes is necessary here

 Done Removed image; I was as well insecure about it.

• "driving" --> "riding" (Riding is typically associated with bicycles)

 Done

• In "Release history", I believe the CD release year was 2012

 Not done there's absolutely no release date nor year of the CD; the only thing we know is that it was released as an Audio CD, unfortunately.

ON HOLD Take as long as you need to address these issues. Carbrera (talk) 18:19, 18 September 2016 (UTC)

@Carbrera: THX for the review. Have responded to your comments. Cheers! Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:36, 18 September 2016 (UTC)