Talk:Élie Okobo

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 15:41, 27 April 2018 (UTC)Reply


Taking this one on. Courcelles (talk) 15:41, 27 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • Surely more than one source is speculating/rating his draft prospects?
  • "the Bordeaux native began his club career at a young age" Just specify the age, don't handwave at it.
  • "17 points, five rebounds, and eight assists" and several other incidents of this type of thing. Within a sentence, either use numerals all the time or write out all the similar quantities. Se either use 5 and 8, or use seventeen.
  • At least three incidents of "vs." in the prose. Write out versus and lose the period.