Hi, I have a couple questions. I have updated my Draft to include more references from reliable sources and have taken inspiration from similar pages that have been accepted, notably Phoebe Richards - Wikipedia and Sarah Jones (field hockey) - Wikipedia.
Firstly, I mistakenly removed the AfD template as the declined template from my first draft was still showing. Will this template be updated after review or should I change it to the original draft template again so its picked up?
Secondly, and this may come up when its reviewed, but any advice as to how I can improve this draft? I'm not sure what I'm doing differently to the pages for other Welsh field hockey players with similar careers. 2A00:23C6:9D0E:9201:C3F:8896:2851:87F5 (talk) 07:40, 1 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
- Just to clarify, the question above is from me... I hadn't logged in Dalex247 (talk) 07:42, 1 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
