Draft talk:Effects of Lakes on Floods in Canada

Latest comment: 1 month ago by Aspen.iris in topic Peer review

Peer review edit

Excellent article! It is extremely well-researched and thorough. I especially like the table of countries with the most lakes.

Ensure you have a lead (like an introduction/summary) at the start of your article - right now it just goes straight into the "Effects of Lakes on Floods in Canada" section. That can help to summarize your info. As well, you might want to rename your table to be "Top ten countries with the most lakes in the world" or something like that to be a bit more descriptive.

I would also suggest possibly adding a bit info to your first section. Right now, the info is very academic, which is amazing but could make it a bit inaccessible to someone who does not know as much about the topic!

Overall, awesome job. Aspen.iris (talk) 15:58, 8 April 2024 (UTC)Reply