Submission declined on 15 June 2024 by Johannes Maximilian (talk). Still no improvement. Sorry, this cannot be accepted. --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 18:59, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
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Submission declined on 21 October 2023 by Theroadislong (talk). This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. Declined by Theroadislong 10 months ago. | ![]() |
Submission declined on 18 October 2023 by Johannes Maximilian (talk). This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. Declined by Johannes Maximilian 10 months ago. | ![]() |
Comment: @User:Angiemcc2023: You have asked me to adopt you, but I guess you want your draft accepted, is that correct? Now, this draft has, as previously suggested, multiple issues, which is why it cannot be accepted. The tone and style aren't good: In Wikipedia, subjects aren't professionals, they don't participate in journeys, and they don't have entrepreneurial portfolios. Also note that vast portions of text are meaningless, for example, the claim that the subject was an administrator with a major telecom company. You need to change the tone and make it siginifcantly more neutral, and your text needs to provide meaningful content.Your referencing is not indicative of a good understanding of citations, so I suggest you read WP:CITEHOW. A book citation for example always contains the author's name, the date, the publisher, and page. "Start up a startup" is not a proper citation.Please also keep in mind that your sources must support the claims that you make in your draft, and that the sources must be independent reliable secondary sources. You cannot cite sponsored content. Best regards, --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 16:41, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
Comment: This draft still reads like a business profile and not like a Wikipedia article. I haven't thorougly checked the sources, but I can already tell that there are duplicates, references to unreliable sources, and references to sources that aren't independent or even secondary. This is unacceptable. Best, --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 14:39, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
Comment: It remains unclear what exactly the subject has done or achieved. --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 10:11, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
Sheikh Asif | |
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Born | |
Occupation(s) | Founder and CEO |
Organization | Thames Infotech |
Awards | Nominee of Padma Shri 2022 |
Sheikh Asif (born August 29, 1993) is an Indian entrepreneur known for his contributions to the technology sector. He is the CEO and founder of Thames Infotech, an IT company based in Manchester.[1][2][3][4]
Early life and Education
editAsif was born on August 29, 1993, in Srinagar, India. Despite dropping out of school after the 8th grade, he exhibited a keen interest in technology and pursued learning through practical experiences..[5][6] [7][8]
Career
editEarly Days
editAsif started his professional journey in the telecommunications sector, serving as a senior computer operator and administrator at Airtel India , Vodafone India.
Thames Infotech
editIn 2014, Asif transitioned into entrepreneurship, establishing Thames Infotech, a digital agency focusing on innovative technological solutions.[9][10][11]
EZ Finder
editIn 2023, Asif expanded his entrepreneurial endeavours with the launch of EZ Finder.[12][13]
Awards
editAsif's contributions to the field have been recognized, earning him a nomination for the Padma Shri award in 2022..[14][15][16][17]
Books
edit- Digitization in Business[18]
- Start a startup[19]
References
edit- ^ "Kashmiri youth launches IT mission to train 10,000 people a year". www.aa.com.tr. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ deevika. "School dropout from Kashmir is now founder and CEO of UK-based web design company". Asianet News Network Pvt Ltd. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ "شیخ آصف کا سی ای او بننے تک کا سفر". ETV Bharat News (in Urdu). 31 July 2020. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ Indiablooms. "Entrepreneur Sheikh Asif empowers Kashmiri youths through IT education and entrepreneurship | Indiablooms - First Portal on Digital News Management". Indiablooms.com. Retrieved 2023-06-22.
- ^ "School dropout creating IT awareness among Kashmiri youth". Hindustan Times. 2021-03-25. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ "نوجوانوں کو آئی ٹی تعلیم مفت فراہم کرنے والے شیخ آصف کے ساتھ گفتگو". ETV Bharat News (in Urdu). 3 April 2021. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ "Started With Rs 1500 Salary, Company Now Worth Rs 2.5 Crore: J&K's Sheikh Asif's Success Story". IndiaTimes. 2021-09-30. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ "Srinagar: Meet Sheikh Asif, a School Dropout Who is Now Worth ₹2.5 Crore". India Today. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ Raja, Vidya (2021-10-20). "His First Salary Was Rs 1500; Today This School Dropout Runs a Rs 2.5 Cr Company". The Better India. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ "१५०० रुपये पगारापासून सुरुवात, २८ वर्षीय तरुण आता कमावतोय अडीच कोटी". eSakal - Marathi Newspaper (in Marathi). 22 October 2021. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ GANAIE, NAZIR (2021-05-24). "School dropout launches IT company, authors 2 books". Greater Kashmir. Retrieved 2023-06-22.
- ^ "कश्मीर: पढ़ाई बीच में छोड़ने वाले शेख आसिफ आईटी उद्योग में क्रांति लाने के मिशन पर, गरीब छात्रों को मुफ्त में देते हैं आईटी की शिक्षा | Journo Mirror". 2023-03-12. Retrieved 2023-10-21.
- ^ Indiablooms. "Entrepreneur Sheikh Asif empowers Kashmiri youths through IT education and entrepreneurship | Indiablooms - First Portal on Digital News Management". Indiablooms.com. Retrieved 2023-10-21.
- ^ "India's emerging entrepreneur Sheikh Asif launches free online courses for Nepalis - OnlineKhabar English News". 2022-07-03. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ "India News | Meet Sheikh Asif: The Visionary Transforming Lives of Kashmiri Youths Through IT". LatestLY. 2023-06-14. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ Bureau, BW Online. "Entrepreneurship Blooms In J-K Post Abrogation Of Article 370". BW Businessworld. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
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has generic name (help)[permanent dead link] - ^ "Padma Shri Nomination List 2022" (PDF).
- ^ "From school dropout to entrepreneur: Kashmiri youth's mission to digitise the valley". Deccan Herald. 2022-07-24. Retrieved 2023-06-15.
- ^ "School dropout Asif Sheikh's UK company has Rs 5 crore turnover". www.awazthevoice.in. Retrieved 2023-06-15.