Draft:Randip Janda

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Declined by Aviram7 5 months ago. Last edited by Achmad Rachmani 5 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: Submission supported by only 1 source only. ~~ αvírαm|(tαlk) 04:39, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

Randip Janda is the host of Hockey Night in Canada Punjabi on OMNI Television, a Sportsnet TV Hockey analyst & Colour Commentator for Vancouver Canucks broadcasts on Sportsnet 650.

Janda is the NHL's 1st South Asian colour commentator in the league's history.^[1]

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^ "Canucks analyst Randip Janda is NHL's first South Asian radio colour commentator". Daily Hive. Retrieved 27 November 2023.

[1] "Canucks analyst Randip Janda is NHL's first South Asian radio colour commentator". Daily Hive. Retrieved 27 November 2023.

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