Draft:Oliver Windonesia Bury

Oliver Bury
Oliver Bury
Birth name	Oliver Windonesia Bury
Nickname(s)	" The Mujahid "
Born	28 April 1968; Badung, West Java, Indonesia
Died	15 May 2018 (aged 50); Vrederust, Makassar, Indonesia
Cause of death	Forced suicide by cyanide poisoning
Buried	Unmarked Grave
Allegiance	Kopassus (1980–2018); Indonesia (1979–1981);
Service/branch	Imperial Indonesian Army;
Years of service	1982–2018
Rank	Commandant
Commands held	Kopassus; Army Group B;
Battles/wars	See battles Insurgency in Aceh; East Timor Santa Cruz massacre; ;
Awards	Star of the Republic of Indonesia; Pour le Mérite; Knight's Cross of the Iron Cross with Oak Leaves, Swords and Diamonds;
Spouse(s)	Hugo Johnson (m. 1992)
Children	Gertrude Johnson; Oscar Bury;

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Declined by CanonNi 13 days ago. Last edited by CanonNi 13 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Oliver Windonesia Bury (20 April 1968 - 15 May 2018) was a Indonesian Born Specialist Soldier who was stationed in East Timor and helped colonise it in 1982 later on in his years he was promoted to Commander Specialist of Jungle warfare, this role helped him establish relationships with the Vietcong

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^ Remy 2002, p. 15.

Oliver Windonesia Bury

[FOOTNOTERemy200215-1] Remy 2002, p. 15.

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Oliver Bury
Birth name	Oliver Windonesia Bury^[1]
Nickname(s)	" The Mujahid "
Born	(1968-04-28)28 April 1968 Badung, West Java, Indonesia
Died	15 May 2018(2018-05-15) (aged 50) Vrederust, Makassar, Indonesia
Cause of death	Forced suicide by cyanide poisoning

Buried	Unmarked Grave
Allegiance	Kopassus (1980–2018) Indonesia (1979–1981)
Service/branch	Imperial Indonesian Army
Years of service	1982–2018
Rank	Commandant
Commands held	Kopassus Army Group B
Battles/wars	See battles Insurgency in Aceh East Timor Santa Cruz massacre
Awards	Star of the Republic of Indonesia Pour le Mérite Knight's Cross of the Iron Cross with Oak Leaves, Swords and Diamonds
Spouse(s)	Hugo Johnson (m. 1992)
Children	Gertrude Johnson Oscar Bury