• Comment: Also to add that there is nothing in that single sentence that tells the reader why this person should be included in a global encyclopaedia; it merely states that he exists and works in a particular role – so what? Which is another way of saying that even if this were accepted, it would be immediately exposed to A7 speedy deletion. DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:07, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Comment: Please do not resubmit until the issues highlighted by Tim are addressed. Personally, i dont see the subject passing WP:GNG. Jamiebuba (talk) 12:03, 26 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Comment: I am not reviewing this a second time. Please note that repeated resubmissions without real improvement will delay any putative acceptance. You have work to do yourself first.
    Please note that you have not actually drafted an article. It contains one line only, and that line, "Nick E. Smith (born February 15, 1985) is an American civil servant, who is the First Deputy Public Advocate of the City of New York.[1][2][3][4][5][6]" is a prime example of WP:CITEKILL. Instead we need one excellent reference per fact asserted. If you are sure it is beneficial, two, and at an absolute maximum, three. Three is not a target, it's a limit. Aim for one. A fact you assert, once verified in a reliable source, is verified. More is gilding the lily. Please choose the very best in each case of multiple referencing for a single point and either drop or repurpose the remainder.
    What you should be doing is finding your references before attempting the draft, marshalling them into a storyboard, and then saying, in your own word what they say about Smith. 🇺🇦 FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 🇺🇦 11:48, 26 May 2024 (UTC)

Nick E. Smith (born February 15, 1985)[citation needed] is an American civil servant, who is the First Deputy Public Advocate of the City of New York.[1][2][3][4][5][6]

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  1. ^ "Green Book Online". a856-gbol.nyc.gov. Retrieved 2024-05-26.
  2. ^ "New York City Public Advocate".
  3. ^ "Representative Adriano Espaillat, Community Leaders Hold Press Conference in Solidarity with Manhattan District Attorney Alvin Bragg | Rep. Adriano Espaillat". espaillat.house.gov. Retrieved 2024-05-26.
  4. ^ "The 2024 Trailblazers in Law". City & State NY. 2024-03-18. Retrieved 2024-05-26.
  5. ^ "Notable Black Leaders and Executives". Crain's New York Business. Retrieved May 26, 2024.
  6. ^ "Boardroom Breakfast with Nick E. Smith, First Deputy Public Advocate". ABNY. Retrieved 2024-05-26.